Try replicating the exercise Jane Olson conducted. After your students have written a piece, have them draw an image that represents the main focus of the writing. (If possible, have them use color.) Next, divide the class into groups to discuss the details in their drawings.
To ensure a productive discussion, you may want to use the following questions, adapted from an article by Probst (1990) in which he formulated questions for discussion based on Rosenblatt's theories of reading and writing. Here the word text is replaced by drawing.
- First Reaction
- What is your first reaction or response to the drawing? Describe or explain it briefly.
- Feelings
- What feelings did the drawing awaken in you? What emotions did you feel as you looked at the drawing?
- Perceptions
- What did you see happening in the drawing? Paraphrase it---retell the major events briefly.
- Visual Images
- What related images did you picture as you looked at the drawing?
- Associations
- What memory does the drawing call to mind - of people, places, events, sights, smells, or even of something more ambiguous, perhaps feelings or attitudes?
- Thoughts, Ideas
- What idea or thought was suggested by the drawing? Explain it briefly.
- Selection of Textual Elements
- Upon what, in the drawing, did you focus most intently as you looked at it?
- Judgments of Importance
- What is the most important part of the drawing?
- Patterns of Response
- How did you respond to the drawing---emotionally or intellectually? Did you feel involved with the drawing, or distant from it?
- Literary Associations
- Does this drawing call to mind any other artwork or literary work (poem, play, film, or story)? If it does, what is the work and what is the connection you see between the two?
Finally, have the students revise their writing using ideas for images that arose from the discussion.
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